Musical Theater Collage 2008
Each year, the Musical Theater department of Elon University presents a performance filled with songs selected from various musicals. Every class participates and comes together to show the audience exactly why Elon is so musically noted.
Click here to see a slideshow of images from the Musical Theater Collage 2008
Deadline Writing: a closer look
9/28/08
By Kate Austin
“Writers come to see [deadline] as ally and enemy, an inspiration to get to work and the borderline that will keep the story from becoming great. The deadline helps kick in adrenaline, the journalists’ drug of choice, the chemical that gets backsides moving toward chairs and hands moving across keyboards.”
- (America’s Best Newspaper Writing)
Writing for a deadline. There’s nothing more frustrating or more motivating. The only way to be effective and have a story ready on time is to prepare in advance. With the nature of media today, where anyone can leak a story with the tools of Youtube and other user sites, the actual reporter must be just as quick to react but with better articulation.
A skillful journalist will not only provide the news, but the meaning behind it.
Leonora LaPeter says that the key is “to write while you’re reporting.” You must be looking for your lead the minute you arrive at the scene. This involves also looking for quotes, details, the transition and the structure of the story.
Even writing the story in the car on the way back from an event is good; that is crucial time to work before deadline.
One tip that I found useful (coming from Francis X. Clines) was to be careful to not let too many people into the story. It is distracting and can eat up the story. Readers enjoy a story that has been learned and retold to them in a readable fashion.
It is not a bad thing to interview a multitude of people and then only use a few of their quotations. Your interviews with them are to help you, the journalist, to tell the story.
The article by Leonora LaPeter, “Jury Sends Santa Claus Killer to Electric Chair” is a great example of deadline writing because it doesn’t feel like it was written for a deadline. The story flows with ease and connects with the reader; she uses just the right amount of storytelling quotes, and it even leaves the reader with a lesson on life.
One story that is categorized under “sports writing on deadline” entitled “A Father’s Drive Must Beat Fright” by Greg Stoda is another good example.
http://www.bestofcox.com/2001/metro/sportsdeadline.html
This story takes a different angle than some other stories written about Alonzo Mourning of the Miami Heat basketball team and his kidney disease. Looking at it from the view of Mourning’s fatherhood being the driving force behind his determination to survive, it was more personable and well articulated.
Next, although this is not a news story per-se, it is written by a deadline news writer, Lisa Ryckman, who’s report on the Columbine school shooting won the 1999 SDX Award for Deadline Reporting.
http://www.spj.org/sdxa2000a.asp
In this little piece, she says that the biggest challenge of deadline news involved “producing a story at the speed of light that didn’t sound as if it had been dashed off on a paper towel in an airport bathroom.”
The goal, according to Ryckman, is to “craft a narrative rich in detail and voices from the scene that could make readers think, feel, and cry into their morning coffee.” In order to compete with television and its “insta-news”, a print reporter’s deadline story has to push the limits; it must go beyond the “initial images and offer insight and context.”
This next story is the best example outside of the book that I have found yet. The 2006 Jesse Laventhol Prize for Deadline Reporting by a Team went partly to David Pierson and Mitchell Landsberg of the Los Angeles Times for “Tragedy on the Rails; Chain-Reaction Crash Kills 11”.
http://www.asne.org/index.cfm?ID=6839
It is apparent that this story was written for a deadline, only because it was such urgent news of a horrible accident.
The facts are given so clearly, and with finesse. The use of language helps the story move along. All the quotes are crucial and storytelling. These are the makings of a great story.
One example of the type of language they used is clearly shown in this excerpt: “Before I knew it, there was a big, big bang. I looked out the window and saw fire,” said Teresa Alderete, 50, of Reseda, a commuter whose train car was transformed in an instant from a rolling island of morning serenity into a nightmare of flying bodies, torn metal and shattered glass.”
The image this creates is just awful, just like the scene would have been.
Another great example of deadline reporting is from that same winning team. This article takes a different viewpoint of the same accident. It focuses more on the man who caused the accident.
http://www.asne.org/index.cfm?ID=6839#troubled
Finally, this also award-winning article is a great example. Titled “Death Toll Reaches 96 in Fire at R.I. Nightclub; 187 Hurt” was written by Thomas Farragher and Douglas Belkin of the Boston Globe.
A Cappella groups show off their talent for Family Weekend at Elon University
9/27/08
By Kate Austin
All three of Elon University’s a cappella groups performed outside the student center on campus today for Parent’s Weekend.

Twisted Measure (soloist Will Armour) performing Gavin DeGraw's "In Love With a Girl" (Photo credit: Cole Gorman).
Families and friends gathered outside to see Twisted Measure (co-ed), Sweet Signatures (all female) and Rip_Chord (all male) sing.
EMULATING INSTRUMENTS: COLLEGIATE A CAPPELLA
These are the sounds of nothing but the human voice. No instruments, no drums, just exaggerated nonsense syllables and vocal tricks taking the listeners on a journey through music, as they have never heard it before.
To the people outside the world of a cappella music, the term usually has the connotation of barbershop, doo-wop, or choral music, none of which accurately represent many of the current groups. Today, collegiate a cappella concerts channel an almost rock-concert feel: one can hear popular songs, world music and new renditions of old favorites.
The art form of a cappella continues to evolve in a variety of ways. The most notable evolution is a gradual drifting-away from traditional barbershop a cappella arrangements to all-vocal versions of modern pop songs. A large influence for this has been the growing popularity of vocal percussion, or “beat-boxing,” which allows more versatility in terms of musical styles.
But if so many people are unaware of the a cappella style of song, what makes collegiate a cappella popular? The constant arms race for new sound and friendly competition between collegiate groups push these musicians to new levels.
It is the driven group members who make this growing style create new sounds and reach fresh ears.
Most collegiate groups are student run; the members of the groups arrange songs and teach the music, with the goal of competing against their peers at collegiate a cappella competitions. Kim Poe, past president of Elon University’s all-female group, Sweet Signatures, explains what goes into preparing for a competition.
“Last year the group had focused most of our energy on revamping our set list to be competition-worthy. We added choreography, a new, professional looking performance attire and carefully arranged and chosen songs to really show off what we’re capable of. We’re really playing the competition game now.

Sweet Signatures performing Sara Bareilles' "Fairytale" at Parent's Weekend (Photo Credit: Cole Gorman).
Until last year, Sweet Signatures had incorporated only minimal choreographed movement, if any. Their ability to step outside of their common routine in order to achieve progress paid off: the “Sigs” won the award for “Best Choreography” at the quarterfinals for the International Championship of A Cappella (ICCA) for the South region.
Collegiate competitions really are a game, says Dave Brown, head of the Varsity Vocals ICCA for the South region.
“You have to play to the audience and the judges. Both want to be entertained, both want you to be innovative and precise. A diverse set list, meaningful and creative choreography, professionalism and musicianship are all weighed heavily during scoring for the ICCA competition. It doesn’t matter if your group is ‘feeling it’, or if you seem to be having fun – that is a bonus – you have got to make the audience and the judges feel the emotion of the song.”
(Video credit: Youtube user ireno315)
While working towards competition goals, the members of collegiate a cappella groups find themselves submerged into the community of a cappella. Michele Hammerbacher, past music director of Sweet Signatures, says that being involved in a collegiate a cappella group is a great way to network with students from other colleges and universities.
“By traveling to other campuses to perform or compete, you meet groups of people with similar interests and make valuable connections with them. These connections are beneficial when inviting a guest group to perform with or when planning a concert tour to different college towns.”
Katie Hight, an Elon University and Sweet Signatures alumni, agrees that the most astounding attribute of a cappella singers is their creation of an incredibly intimate community.
“An entire a cappella world exists unbeknownst to non-a cappella’ers… those who have never heard of BOCA [Best of College A Cappella, a competitive album produced by an organization called Varsity Vocals], ICCA, or SoJam, and would be given strange looks if they used anything but the appropriate acronym.”
Collegiate a cappella groups network with one another, extending invitations to various concerts and festivals, sharing new techniques and even sharing song arrangements.
Hight explains that “newcomers to groups gradually come to learn the (mostly) unspoken hierarchy present in the community; well-established groups almost always preside over newer groups, and professional groups above the collegiate ones. A cappella singers have a culture of their own, complete with norms and values (rehearsal time, tuning, blend, choreography), and symbols (a signature musical note, performance attire, and even pieces of signature ‘flair’).”
SoJam, which Hight spoke of, is an a cappella weekend extravaganza that includes a competition, a professional concert, and a day of master classes taught by professional a cappella singers from all over the world. For many new members of collegiate a cappella groups, this becomes their first experience within the real culture of a cappella.
Merrill Ward, who joined Sweet Signatures in the fall of last year, said she was excited to be thrown into this new community of people to meet.
“Before SoJam, the other Sigs would talk about ‘Dave Sperandio’ and ‘Jo Bates’ and ‘Dave Brown’ and all these big names in a cappella; I had no idea what they were talking about. But a weekend filled with learning, music and all the people who are crucial to meet in the a cappella community was the best way to get in the know”.
Poe chimed in to say that by bringing professionals and students together who love the art form of a cappella, the genre has grown to be one of the most impacting experiences for many students across the country.
These connections with important a cappella community members can, on occasion, create the lucky opportunity for a professional singing career. Katie Hight graduated college and joined a professional group, Almost Recess, upon graduating.
“The tight-knit community is exactly how I found myself becoming involved in professional a cappella. Networking and making connections through collegiate workshops and competitions gave me the names I needed to pursue singing professionally.”
Although the group wants to be successful and known for their music and talents, the main reason college students join or audition for collegiate a cappella groups is the same as any club or team – the bonds.
As Kent Bell, a member of the all male group Juxtaposition at Virgina Tech worded it, “I have 14 best friends and they are all in Juxta.” Hammerbacher, who graduated last year from Elon, values the memories with her a cappella group as the best of her college career.
“Joining Sigs gave me the opportunity to make sisters out of friends who are as obsessed with music and singing as I am.”
To see the rest of the photographs from the performance at Parent’s Weekend, click here!
Elon University reacts to the bailout bill
9/24/08
By Kate Austin
The Bush Administration is working to have Congress pass a new bailout bill to help with the current economic situation. The government is expected to pay $700 billion to bail out companies with financial trouble. This amount, equivalent of $2,333 per American citizen is what the government would pledge in hopes of remedying the economic stress.
On a national level, this is big news. But concerns on a more local level in the town of Elon are prevalent as well. Mayor Jerry Tolley of Elon said in regards to the bailout plan that it is something we as a country must do, “if you can help the big people on Wall Street, you can help the poor people here with mortgages.”
Francine Light, a deli clerk at the Colonnades dining hall at Elon University, has personally been affected by the recent lack of economic help. “My mother did lose her house…and my husband is losing his job in October. The pay cuts are not fair,” she said. Light does not think that the bailout bill is a smart idea. She reasoned, “It’s got its ups and downs. You’d think it would help, but I think they should give half [the money] to see if it would help [before giving all of it].”
In concept, with the bailout bill, we’re doing the right thing, according to Steve DeLoach professor of economics at Elon University. He said, “The general idea of the bailout bill is trying to avoid the Great Depression. They’re trying to avoid the 25% unemployment [that occurred in the Great Depression].”
Video Interviewer: Emily Silva
An Elon University student, Emily Dunn, reacts to the plan.
Video Interviewer: Emily Silva
Local Reporting and Beat Writing: Tip by tip
by Kate Austin
9/21/08
I am finding that in all of my assessments of different types of writing (based on the chapters in America’s Best Newspaper Writing) I am pointing out the same characteristics that are true for all good writing: clarity, coherence, emotion and an interesting way of getting facts across to the reader.
This is true, once again, for local reporting and beat writing. However, the authors of the book did have some gold coins of good writing tips scattered throughout the chapter. Although I didn’t enjoy Dan Neil’s article “Caught Up in the Crossfire”, I recognized it as good writing and took some notes on how to make the beat “become the offbeat”. Combining reporting and literary skills in just the right measure makes for a good story.
The author also discusses two models for the role of journalism that are quite interesting. The traditional model calls for a detached and independent journalist who remains neutral (and even better, objective) about the outcome. The new model says “the reporter must not be just a watchdog, biting the heels of official power, but also a guide dog, leading citizens toward solutions and the common good” (pg. 29). This quote seemed highly appropriate for the subject of reporting for the public good.
The book points out that whichever model you subscribe to as a journalist, the most important thing that communities need from their writers is a “distinctive vision and a powerful voice, one that speaks directly to the readers.”
My favorite article from the chapter (and also of the other articles that I found as examples) was “Mackenzie Football Star Another Gunplay Victim” written by Mitch Albom. I wondered if it would have been my favorite if I hadn’t known and loved Albom’s books, but I realized that good writing is good writing. And this is good writing. The way the story plays out gives the audience facts, plays heavily on their pathos and even leaves them with a lesson. I admire how Albom fed the audience the lesson without sounding like it was his opinion admonishing them.
Moving out of the book, the article “Cruelest mystery: death before life” by Diana Sugg is a great example of a beat piece.
http://www.pulitzer.org/archives/6637
Tip #1: Keep It Personal
This article uses a family’s personal story as a way to move through the issue of infant stillbirths. It is not a story of Margarete Heber and her stillborn daughter Elisabetha, but rather an article on the researchers new efforts to reduce this occurrence with a family story tied in. This form is very effective in keeping the audience connected to the issue. Sugg never weighs the reader down in straight facts, but instead brings in key quotations and tidbits about the Heber’s when the article begins to get too medical. She uses the Heber’s as a reminder to the reader that there is a personal and very human reason to care about the subject.
The article “A Wife’s Struggle With Cancer Takes an Unexpected Toll” by Amy Dockser Marcus took an unexpected angle.
http://www.pulitzer.org/archives/6846
Tip #2: Find A Correlation And See Where It Takes You
I did not expect this article to discuss how cancer makes increases the odds of divorce. In fact, I don’t know that I would have ever looked into that correlation if it weren’t for this article. It is also a great article because it follows tip number one. The story is very personal; in fact, it’s almost nothing but personal.
Tip #3: Simplicity Is Key
Marcus takes the audience through the whole length of Mrs. O’Donnell’s struggle, however, she writes it in a clear, concise manner (but not to the point of leaving out detail). If you stop to think how long someone’s “life story” could be, and then realize the brief length of this article, the craft of each word is apparent.
The article titled “Seniors Still Await Services” by Debbie Cenziper is just one part of a group of articles she reported on the Miami housing agency’s lack of oversight.
http://www.pulitzer.org/archives/7163
Tip #4: Give The People What They Want
Obviously, writing for The Miami Herald, the people want to know what is happening in their local area, hence the idea of “local reporting”. However, no tip for good writing is too obvious! This article intensifies the point that a good journalist will anticipate the questions that their audience wants answered. A journalist is the behind-the-scenes eyes and ears for the public. Cenziper’s articles are very news-y, but it is news that the people want to hear!
The article “CIA Holds Terror Suspects in Secret Prisons” by Dana Priest tells about the growing debate within the CIA about actions overseas after 9/11.
http://www.pulitzer.org/archives/6955
Tip #5: Objectivity In The Face Of Controversy
Anything to do with military actions is controversial in America today; therefore, when handling reporting like this it is beneficial to subscribe to the traditional model of journalism discussed in the book. Staying objective keeps the credibility of a journalist, and Priest does this gracefully in her article.
The shocking article “U Basketball Program Accused of Academic Fraud” by George Dohrmann unveiled shocking news that men’s basketball players at the University of Minnesota had cheated their way thorough college.
http://www.pulitzer.org/archives/6281
Tip #6: Guilty Pleasures Are Key
In America, we love scandals. We seem to live for reality television (scandal), and gossip (scandal). Uncovering a scandal, but doing it in a tasteful way, makes great news as Dohrmann proved with his controversial articles regarding the University of Minnesota.
The Profile and Feature Story: a closer look
By Kate Austin
Sept. 14, 2008
Fact, narrative, knowledge; these are the basis for a compelling feature or profile story. The writer must have five times as many facts on the subject than they need for the actual piece. The writer must orchestrate an undeniably interesting narrative that draws even the reader who could care less about the topic (or person). The writer must have the desire to know the subject inside and out, and show not even a hint of misunderstanding or lack of knowledge on the subject.
These requirements all seem basic enough, yet I am amazed at how well the example stories in the book (America’s Best Newspaper Writing) controlled all of the necessary elements and took the story to the next level with telling quotes, interesting nuggets of information, and insight into the personalities of their subjects.
Specifically, the story Dr. Seuss: Wild Orchestrator of Plausible Nonsense for Kids by Cynthia Gorney illustrates a side to the beloved children’s author that an audience has never seen before. The most difficult part of writing a piece like this, to me, seems to be deciding what angle to take. I’m sure there are innumerable things that the public does not know about Theodor Seuss Geisel (Dr. Seuss), but how does a reporter find the most interesting, surprising, or exciting thing about their subject?
On an entirely different note, the last piece that chapter seven of the book examines is the most exciting and interesting to me. Ken Fuson’s “weather sentence” titled Ah, What a Day! is remarkable. It is over 275 words, but only one sentence long. The most amazing part is, it makes entirely perfect sense and not once does it seem like a run-on sentence. There are poetic elements and interesting wordplay that make it fun to read. He took an assignment to report on the weather change in Iowa, and serves it up as a “tasty slice of life”.
Moving on from the book, I found five other examples of feature writing that sparked my interest and aided me in really understanding what good feature writing is all about.
http://www.pulitzer.org/works/2002,Feature+Writing
This article, A Father’s Pain, a Judge’s Duty, and a Justice Beyond Their Reach, written by Barry Siegel illustrates one of the most important parts of feature writing. The piece itself feels like a story, a narrative. There is no author mediation between the factual narrative and the audience. You forget that you are reading a news story, and instead it flows like a short novel. This is crucial to creating a relationship between the story and it’s subject and the audience.
Also, I like the way the article is broken up into sections with headers for each section. Because it is a longer piece, this breaks it up into a more reader-friendly presentation.
http://www.pulitzer.org/archives/6449
Writing about someone else’s painful life story must be draining. However, the heart-wrenching story of Sam Lightner, told in four parts by Tom Hallman Jr., is more than worth reading. It is the sort of story that one cannot help but read until the final period. For feature writing, a topic can make or break you (as in any writing). Public interest is crucial. This story is an example of telling a painful story in a tactful way; one that makes the audience feel for the subject, and by filling the story with undeniable heart rather than an overflow of medical facts creates a readable, interesting piece.
http://www.pulitzer.org/works/2008,Feature+Writing
This is not the first time I have read this particular feature story, Pearls Before Breakfast by Gene Weingarten, and yet I find it interesting enough to read all the way through for probably the third time.
This piece was handled almost as an experiment. With hypotheses made by famous people in the business of music, and the idea actually put to the test. But that’s not even the best part. It is the way that Weingarten poses the questions to the reader, directly involving you and inspiring self-examination of how you may react in the situational experiment as it was.
“Do you stop and listen? Do you hurry past with a blend of guilt and irritation, aware of your cupidity but annoyed by the unbidden demand on your time and your wallet? Do you throw in a buck, just to be polite? Does your decision change if he’s really bad? What if he’s really good? Do you have time for beauty? Shouldn’t you? What’s the moral mathematics of the moment?”
The conversational aspect of this piece is also taken to the next level. It is as though the reader is the one discussing the reactions to their little experiment with Joshua Bell. That sense that the reporter is the one doing the story disappears and it is almost as though you are part of a puppet show…you know that the reporter is there, as the puppet handler, but instead you are reacting and interacting with the puppet, or subject of the story, instead.
http://www.pulitzer.org/archives/6902 - A series of three stories by Julia Keller of a deadly 10-second tornado in Utica, Illinois.
http://www.pulitzer.org/archives/6694 - A series of six sections by Sonia Nazfario on a Honduran boy’s search for his mother who migrated to the United States.
All of the examples here of good feature writing have one main thing in common: They draw the reader in. Whether this is by intriguing dialogue, flowing narrative, or directly questioning the reader, every article shares the facts in a reader-friendly way. The Pulitzer Prize site distinguishes outstanding feature writing by high literary quality and originality, and all of these pieces prove that.
Electronic family ties: Why the Internet is important in my life
By Kate Austin
Sept. 11, 2008
My older brother and I have always been close. We attended the same elementary school, high school and university; we spent years bailing each other out of trouble, sharing rides, advice and friends. He was always around to help me with problems or initiate wild adventures. After graduation, he moved to Wyoming, leaving me in a different time zone.
Keeping in touch is difficult. It takes initiative, time and some sort of means to actually communicate. Letters are slow and the telephone poses the constraints of needing both people to be available at the same time. The invention of the Internet provided a form of communication that is close to instantaneous, but could be used at one’s leisure.
My friends and family know that the easiest way to reach me is through e-mail, since I am somewhat addicted to checking it and am constantly on the run. Through e-mail I am able to continue to get my brother’s advice on how to deal with Mom and Dad (and then immediately e-mail them, using his guidance). We share stories and photos constantly, whether it is 8 in the morning before classes or when he gets home from work late at night.
He sends me links to websites that he finds hilarious, knowing that I’ll laugh with him. He sends photographs of his extreme mountain biking adventures that make me glad to be sent a photograph, rather than being beside him fearing for his life. I’ve even met his new cat, Kenya, thanks to the invention of Web cameras and a neat little program called Skype. Even though I won’t see my brother until December, the Internet keeps convenient communication in our hectic lives.

My brother, Mike Austin, mountain biking in Wyoming (Photo credit: Joana Lau).
Living life for the stories: Mark Moffett speaks at Elon University
By Kate Austin
Sept. 9, 2008
If your dream is to be a journalist, don’t major in it.
If you want to be a photographer, don’t major in it.
These professions are all about the stories; study where the stories are.
This is the advice given to Elon University students, faculty, guests and all who attended the first Liberal Arts Forum event of the semester.
“An Engaging Look at Nature and Why It’s Worth Protecting,” a presentation by Mark Moffett, renowned photojournalist, didn’t focus exactly on the title of the lecture. Rather, through explaining stories and the biological information behind his vivid photography, Moffett focused on how to be a successful journalist.
Moffett, with a background in biology, has produced over 500 images appearing in National Geographic magazine. “I’m not interested in photography. I’m interested in the story.”
He urged the audience to major in the stories that they want to tell because infinite numbers of people take pictures. “Life is about telling stories,” he said, “and for me, biology is one of the greatest stories out there.”
Adventures that many people will never encounter are innumerable in Moffett’s stories. He has climbed and camped in redwood trees over 350 feet tall, all to learn more about a creature in nature.
For him, it is more than a passion, it is true love. “True love involves taking risks. You take risks that are meaningful to you because of the stories.”
Moffett’s idea is to make people fall in love with the unexpected. “Find something that no one’s seen before. That’s where the story is.”
For more information on Mark Moffett and his work, visit Doctor Bug’s Web.
Video clips from the presentation show Mark Moffett’s way of entertaining the audience:
Concert on the lawn: Josh Kelley at Elon University
By Kate Austin
Sept. 9, 2008
Each year, Elon University invites a musician to perform during one of the final nights of new student orientation. This year the musician was singer/songwriter Josh Kelley, whose performance style proved to be more interactive than guest musicians past years.
Inviting students to come on stage with him and be “backup dancers,” Kelley performed and danced with students. Junior Erin Lewandowski, said “There was a point when he initiated a dance-off, and some girls onstage got up close and danced behind him…one even touched his face!”
For more information on Josh Kelley and his music, visit his homepage or his myspace site.








